You haven't mentioned Kitase yet outside the lead, so his full name and role should be added here.
so Kitase sought to fill this perceived gap in the market.
You should either explain or link to another FF article on WP that explains it.
Is this all there is to the plot? I haven't played Mobius, so I don't know for sure, but it seems more like the game's premise.
I trimmed it and got rid of seemingly unnecessary capitalization, let me know if you'd like me to cut more.) Plot
(it was probably because of the very thin and long shape of the screenshot.
The caption for the screenshot is quite long, stretching all the way into "development" on my screen.
"elemental Elements" sounds really weird and should be rewritten.
( I don't see anything saying that break gauge needs to be capitalized, but ability and elements seem to be capitalized terms when the game is described, so I left those capitalized.)
Does field map need to be capitalized? Same goes for other gameplay systems like "Ability" and "Break Gauge".
Change it to something like "adjust the controls based on their dominant hand." this repetition of players seems weird.
Players can adjust the controls for right or left-handed players.
It being optimized for phones sounds more like development than gameplay.
You don't need to add a ref to the release date in the infobox since the date is sourced further down.
This should be changed when it appears later in the article, too
"fast travel systems" should be fast-travel systems.
I assume it's "from previous Final Fantasy titles".
The game features gameplay elements from previous Final Fantasy, This isn't quite right.
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I'll be doing this one.- IDV talk 01:30, (UTC) GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)Ī (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Mobius Final Fantasy/GA1.
Western Chapter dates, Warrior of Despair Chapter 1 Part 1 and Part 2 and Part 3, Chapter 2 Part 1 and Part 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, Final Chapter.
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